Criticise – a 50 Word Story

In response to The Daily Post’s prompt of criticise:


He fell across his plate. The contents of his head drawing the displeased look from his face as they oozed over the crisp Damask tablecloth.

Emily sat down to her salmon mousse and spooned the delectable fluffy starter into her mouth. She really didn’t see what he was complaining about.


About Nicola Auckland

Busy wife to one & mum to two. I've caught the creative writing bug, now need to practice, get awesome and write something worth reading. Simples.
This entry was posted in flash fiction, Short Stories, Writing and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

9 Responses to Criticise – a 50 Word Story

  1. I have to cancel that dinner date we had!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Ben says:

    Big fan of this one! Appeals to my dark humour

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Love the dark humour and the vivid image you create. Shades of gothic horror…

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Davy D says:

    There are some people in this world you can never please Nicola, or is the falling across the plate something more sinister?


Don't be shy, join the conversation. Let us know what you think.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s