Unrequited Love

Written for Mindandlifematters‘ Limerick challenge. This week’s prompt was dream.

Unrequited Love 

I hear your voice and wish you knew,
How you jolt and scare me too.
My heart’s attached,
My soul is matched,
When I sleep, I dream of you.


Photo by Kelsey_lovefusionphotos


About Nicola Auckland

Busy wife to one & mum to two. I've caught the creative writing bug, now need to practice, get awesome and write something worth reading. Simples.
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16 Responses to Unrequited Love

  1. Good to read that this is true for the majority struck with unrequited love. So apt and concise. Love your writing.


  2. Really appeals to me, the simplicity of your words alongside the power of the feelings – empathic and heartfelt


  3. unorthodoxturtles says:

    Reblogged this on unorthodoxturtles.


  4. The flutter of dreamy love, so beautiful!


  5. calensariel says:

    That is so tender and child-like. Very lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Oooh. love it. Dreamy indeed! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Arcane Owl says:

    Wow….this is so good! I just love it! You’ve captured the emotions so well 🙂

    Have a great day!
    Arcane owl

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    • Thank you. I’m only just starting to try my hand at poetry. I’ve never really understood it unless it rhymes but, if you don’t try things that challenge and scare you how will you know if you’re any good at it? That’s my theory anyway!

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      • Lori Carlson says:

        I would never have guessed you are new to writing poetry.. congrats at trying something new! And i agree.. this is my first time ever writing a mystery and I am enjoying it (although I don’t know how good it is.. lol)

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