Limerick Challenge – Pain 

This week’s limerick challenge from mindandlifematters runs to Thursday 4th February so be sure to head over and submit your entry. 


The pain of their loss numbs her heart

Despair binding her chest at day’s start

But continue she must,

Trying hard to adjust 

And force smiles as her soul tears apart. 


About Nicola Auckland

Busy wife to one & mum to two. I've caught the creative writing bug, now need to practice, get awesome and write something worth reading. Simples.
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8 Responses to Limerick Challenge – Pain 

  1. This one really struck a chord with me! so beautifully and poetically described! 🙂

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  2. Captures the emotion beautifully!

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  3. ranu802 says:

    I can actually visualize your limerick about pain. It’s awesome! 🙂

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