Limerick Challenge – Breeze

I was thrilled to win last week’s Limerick Challenge hosted by MindandLifeMatters. My thanks go to Rashmi for hosting this fun event. If you haven’t already found this blog challenge, I urge you to pop over and have a go. Don’t make your entry too good though, I’m saving for Christmas and the winner’s gift voucher is gratefully received!

This week, the prompt is Breeze. Since it’s Armictice Day tomorrow, I gave my entry a wartime theme:

The name on her tag said Louise,

On the platform she sank to her knees

The trains came and went,

But no-one was sent,

And her cries flew away on the breeze.


About Nicola Auckland

Busy wife to one & mum to two. I've caught the creative writing bug, now need to practice, get awesome and write something worth reading. Simples.
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5 Responses to Limerick Challenge – Breeze

  1. Indira says:

    Very nice. Congrats.


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  3. Brilliant! So intense! 🙂


  4. Oh I love this! So poignant and relevant right now. You will win again! xo

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